The Trail of Discovery
View the stream
All straight and crooked
A hidden energy seemingly pulling
At a speed just barely visible
Discover the air about
Fluidly as it pushes
Against a soothing surface
Find the tangle of small willows
With leaning reflections
And there too the stones
Ahead on the bank
Slight movements
Gently mirror the way
Where water meets air
Within the climate of the calm
See the swallows
Skimming along the water's surface
Twisting their narrow wings to rise
Without a thought nor surprise
All these and more
Encompassed with robust depths
From within and be more
Within find One
All encompassed without surprise
For there lays the foundation
Of true discovery
~ jgs ~
Beautiful graphic for a beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteNot my graphic but there are times where there is a flow. Thanks and God Bless.
ReplyDeleteWOW. This is really fluid and beautifully done. I really like it.
ReplyDeleteWe all have that trail of discovery Mel and within life it all has a way of unfolding. As yours did today in a miraculous way.
ReplyDeleteYes it did Jack... I have had a sense of peace all week but was still nervous about the dr. visit. I feel like I have time.
ReplyDeleteOh I really like this. It brings back some beautiful thoughts of buzzing gardens with birds,bees,butterflies and faerie worlds.
ReplyDelete.lovely ..feel the walk,,in tranquillity..thankyou..[[hugss]]
ReplyDeleteVery good Jack! It tells the journey of discovery
ReplyDelete"Within find One
ReplyDeleteAll encompassed without surprise
"For there lays the foundation
Of true discovery".
Beautiful.
i hope it is ok ... to quote unquote this lines, Jack, for it is here where the meat of your poem lies. tight hugs.
discovery and journey were the two words that had come to mind. Yep.
ReplyDeleteLook at all that you wrote. Discovery, encompass, within, beautiful - anyone can right. :)
ReplyDeleteTruly beautiful. Nice poem to come home and read
ReplyDeleteImpactful...very lovely
ReplyDeleteThanks as it is what it is Cheryl.
ReplyDeleteThanks...
ReplyDeletevery well captured in the minds eye of scope in a small but quaint setting great Job Jack
ReplyDeleteThanks Ken when it comes to be work - then it's not creative.
ReplyDeleteyes I agree everything should be within ease in the writers scope allowing the free flowing thoughts to come forth and create inspiring and moving poetry that fills and lifts one's mind to new levels.
ReplyDeleteJust got back on here Ken and yeah I think so. I have been reading news. But yes I feel so...
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