The heavens murmur while the sounds shine
Those stars up there seem to love the thunder
Making music within the intertwine
An exchange as I raise my hand
I can feel the drops of water on my palm
Soon this shall pass
The naked branches shall flourish
The trees seem to be reaching for the skies
Waiting for the sun to render it rays
Inhaling it all I breath the treasure
That is rendered at this time of the year
They fulfills my breath
As the performance
Is that of the beauty of nature
The simplicity of the treasures are rendered
I breathe it in and exhale it out
While the beautify of nature unveils
What unfolds
~jgs~
Nice introduction to nature and the beauty of it all.love it. thanks Jack, enjoy your weekend. :))
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ReplyDeletethis is brilliant Jack. just brilliant
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ReplyDeletea beautiful expression of the spring , i was picturing the images as i was reading the words, nice poem my friend.
So it does....
ReplyDeleteYour welcome, As I was just looking for a title - one had given one and then I took an idea from there ....the long weekend shall be nice and to you as well.
ReplyDeleteThank you
ReplyDeleteDanette I wish to get into it and so often after a day it takes some time in doing so. But I did things and then juanted a few things down and this is not a copy and paste.
ReplyDeleteThank you to another creative writer...
Yeah I was going to add a picture and then I took it out as I think the words are what is of value - sip of a coffee, not british tea but I thank you and it is what it is.
ReplyDelete....with a murmur.
ReplyDeleteMy dear friend seems to be very inspired today!
ReplyDeleteNice writing and may you have a nice weekend..
Thanks Lettie - my desktop completely went down with certain drivers so I am on this laptop that with my eyes I don't see all that well and a great Saturday to you...
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