Thursday, April 30, 2009

Beauty within a Breath

The heavens murmur while the sounds shine

Those stars up there seem to love the thunder

Making music within the intertwine

An exchange as I raise my hand

I can feel the drops of water on my palm

Soon this shall pass

The naked branches shall flourish

The trees seem to be reaching for the skies

Waiting for the sun to render it rays

Inhaling it all I breath the treasure

That is rendered at this time of the year

They fulfills my breath

As the performance

Is that of the beauty of nature

The simplicity of the treasures are rendered

I breathe it in and exhale it out

While the beautify of nature unveils

What unfolds

 

 

~jgs~

12 comments:

  1. Nice introduction to nature and the beauty of it all.love it. thanks Jack, enjoy your weekend. :))

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  2. this is brilliant Jack. just brilliant

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  3. a beautiful expression of the spring , i was picturing the images as i was reading the words, nice poem my friend.

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  4. Your welcome, As I was just looking for a title - one had given one and then I took an idea from there ....the long weekend shall be nice and to you as well.

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  5. Danette I wish to get into it and so often after a day it takes some time in doing so. But I did things and then juanted a few things down and this is not a copy and paste.

    Thank you to another creative writer...

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  6. Yeah I was going to add a picture and then I took it out as I think the words are what is of value - sip of a coffee, not british tea but I thank you and it is what it is.

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  7. My dear friend seems to be very inspired today!
    Nice writing and may you have a nice weekend..

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  8. Thanks Lettie - my desktop completely went down with certain drivers so I am on this laptop that with my eyes I don't see all that well and a great Saturday to you...

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