Wednesday, February 9, 2011

It's All Quiet Right

It's All Quiet Right

You were sitting and I was thinking
Of all the times that we have been spending around
The situation could only get better
And I never uncovered
Nor discovering what I found
 It's All Quiet Right
 
This situation can only get better
Seemingly it's all quiet right
 
 
In the morning, just moving easy
These moments seem so right
The sun is rising and those soft whispers
These moments we just seem to understand
Nothing fancy just so easy
One realizes what may be found
 
 
This situation could only get better
As it's all quiet right
 
 
When the night comes while you were dreaming
I was thinking about the things we've said
It's looking forward
With a certain ease now
Time isn’t passing us by
This situation can only get better
As it seems quiet right

~jgs~

 

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25 comments:

  1. maritess* estrellaFebruary 9, 2011 at 5:07 PM

    am back Jack. This one is beautiful ... can I borrow it[?] :)

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  2. Initiative StainFebruary 9, 2011 at 5:07 PM

    Not this one please Maritess ok?

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  3. maritess* estrellaFebruary 9, 2011 at 5:08 PM

    ok ...

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  4. Initiative StainFebruary 9, 2011 at 5:09 PM

    Thank you....but you can certainly write!

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  5. maritess* estrellaFebruary 9, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    i know now. yes.

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  6. Initiative StainFebruary 9, 2011 at 5:15 PM

    As everyone can....



    All it takes is with that start of one word...

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  7. Cheryl LynnFebruary 9, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    Very Nice

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  8. Cheryl LynnFebruary 9, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    Both the picture and the poem are lovely together

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  9. Initiative StainFebruary 9, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    Yeah and I look forward to the prospect as mentioned which happened by coincidence today Cheryl.

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  10. Initiative StainFebruary 9, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    It's an old one and I just came in from outside and am just reading.
    The simplest word something...

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  11. Theresa ♥February 9, 2011 at 6:39 PM

    Very lovely Jack. I can tell these words come from the heart!

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  12. Initiative StainFebruary 9, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    I have wrote poems, lyrics on and off Theresa, this one did and it was back some time ago yet we render things from the heart. I still maintain that most all can write within that manner within poetry. This one was an old one but I think of one word and I take it from there but it's all inclined to be more lyrical - yet words are words and what we express is in what we wish to address.


    As well we keep our heart rate going while we train....as I hope that is going well for you. :)

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  13. Theresa ♥February 9, 2011 at 6:53 PM

    Yes, Jack, going well. Sore this week as I've just started back again, and the muscles aren't used to it yet. Heading off to bed soon. Good night Jack.

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  14. Initiative StainFebruary 9, 2011 at 6:56 PM

    Ditto here but you are the first I have seen that actually has mentioned what you are doing and place a picture on it and that is right up there.
    It's that spirit of the New Yorker in ya! ~ Smiling ~

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  15. Initiative StainFebruary 10, 2011 at 4:35 AM

    Thanks Susan and it's going up to zero today thus it is good!

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  16. Susan FriggeFebruary 10, 2011 at 4:55 AM

    Then I shall not complain that today is suppose to stay in the 30s here - lol.

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  17. Initiative StainFebruary 10, 2011 at 4:58 AM

    For your climate there that is cold Susan. We all are climatized to where we reside - I think or thunk :).

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  18. Susan FriggeFebruary 10, 2011 at 5:18 AM

    Yeah, we are all pansies here in south Texas when it comes to "cold" weather - lol. There is a reason why I don't live farther north. Don't envy that weather at all. Hope you are enjoying your day so far. I will off in about an hour to go childsit my neighbor's kids while she is at school.

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  19. Initiative StainFebruary 10, 2011 at 5:35 AM

    No way well come to think of it lol I don't know if many could handle cold weather but come Spring and Summer - it's one that I love.
    We all adapt regardless of if we are in Canada, Australia, United States, Chile, Germany, England, France - the list goes on...:)

    But at least we are not walking on 43rd street in Egypt as warm as it is.

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  20. Cinabear CinnamonFebruary 10, 2011 at 5:58 AM

    In the quiet there can be tranquil peace. Gm xx great pic :)

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  21. Susan FriggeFebruary 10, 2011 at 6:16 AM

    Yes, definitely take the cold over that.

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  22. Jo BFebruary 11, 2011 at 8:52 AM

    "all is quiet right"... beautiful words, Jack. Love the sentiments of this poem.

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  23. Initiative StainFebruary 11, 2011 at 2:30 PM

    Thank you Jo and ...I will head to your page :) to continue....

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  24. caroline carolineFebruary 12, 2011 at 10:14 AM

    such moving and gentle ...words..[hugs]

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  25. Initiative StainFebruary 12, 2011 at 12:40 PM

    Yeah they were I guess :)

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