Fiction In a Flash # 13: Self - Centered
Her husband catered to her every whim. Insistent with friends to act within her accord. Demanding without her ever realizing it. Ironically Mr. Jones passed on. Mrs. Jones was upset that there was more attention being paid to her husband rather than herself.
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thats very good....intriguing
ReplyDeleteInteresting. Now compress all that to 55 words. lol. Yup, what a challenge huh? :)
ReplyDeleteThere was this challenge and I thought I would partake.
ReplyDeleteyes agree ..with roggy .. a bit of compressing ...
ReplyDeleteMrs. Jones needs a wake-up call!
ReplyDelete(This isn't 55 words.)
Jack, nice write, but the challenge calls for 55 words, my friend. I have confidence in you that you can do it! Also, it does not have to be about self-centeredness. That was my take on it. However you want to interpret the pic is cool. Give it another shot ;).
ReplyDelete... i guess we are all in a way Jack. And we have to admit that.
ReplyDelete... by the way ... how about Mr. Jones. kiddo' ;)
I don't really like Mrs Jones .Perhaps if she was deleted you could make 55 words.
ReplyDeleteWell written.
http://neuron66.multiply.com/journal/item/38/The_Earth_Moved
Oh? Sorry as this was my first...
ReplyDeleteMy mistake, as it's a I can see around now 120 words. This was a first as when I arrived home I figure I would give it a try.
ReplyDeleteShall take a look Mary.
Patty thanks yeah I thought it was on self centeredness. I shall :)
ReplyDeleteI got home and was waiting for the pizza to be delivered lol - my excuse.
ReplyDeleteYeah Rog, I gather that.
ReplyDeleteThere :)
ReplyDeletePssssssssst Jack....it's still more than 55 words.
ReplyDeletelol I tried! :)
ReplyDeletePerfect!
ReplyDeleteI just stepped away and got back in here.
ReplyDeleteshame on Mrs. Jones for being so selfish.
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