Sunday, March 14, 2010

Seems Quiet Right

Seems Quiet Right

 

You were sitting and I was thinking

Of all the times that we have been spending around

The situation could only get better

And I never uncovered

Nor discovering what I found

 

 

This situation can only get better

Seemingly it's all quiet right

 

 

In the morning, just moving easy

These moments seem so right

The sun is rising and those soft whispers

These moments we just seem to understand

Nothing fancy just so easy

One realizes what may be found

 

 

This situation could only get better

As it's all quiet right

 

 

When the night comes while you were dreaming

I was thinking about the things we've said

It's looking forward

With a certain ease now

Time isn’t passing us by

This situation can only get better

As it seems quite right

 

~jgs~

 

13 comments:

  1. I love this. It makes me think of Gordon, which is always a very pleasant thing.

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  2. ... i love it. Written very carefully. i know your heart goes with it
    hugs tight :)

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  3. Sorry, folks who don't know me. Gordon was my husband.

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  4. Quite a nice way to start this day, nicely woven. Beautiful. The sun has not been rising here yet. A blissful day ahead Jack.

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  5. Very nice Jack, I like it. Especially the morning verse.

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  6. .such ..a lovely ..poem ..made me smile..

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  7. Well penned, Jack. I can read so much into this poem. It's that big.

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  8. Nice poem.."Looking forward with a certain ease " Sounds good

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  9. I'm so looking forward to peace & quiet. Love this.

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