Streams Within Time
Streams within time
Implementing its breath
Swaying back and forth
An imagining of the world
Streams within the time
Extend ahead and beyond
Yet not precise
Instrumental perhaps
Yet maybe so undefined
Streams within time
One listens and is able
To perceive the sound
A sequential rotation
Within this planet
From this very ground
Glance up
For there is that view
The dancing of the stars
Look over there
As Venus dances with Mars
All within a sequential rotation
As the universe expresses
An implementation of it's breath
~Jgs~
Very nice
ReplyDeleteThere was a note that I read and it just gave way to this...
ReplyDeletethis is good Jack...all about the pale blue dot
ReplyDeleteAh, ha. . .
ReplyDeleteOne just comes back to this and you just write from your soul
ReplyDeleteand Dana then it just comes. Yeah one simple thought will give
way to something and one never reads a write but one just flows with
the keyboard. Thanks.
Yeah! :)
ReplyDeleteyes Jack, it gets hold of you and you have to write it or go sleepless
ReplyDeletemuch like a night cap....
ReplyDeleteand so it is within a moment words flow not from us but rather through us and in the exhale--the letting go---the words find the place where they are most needed----
ReplyDeleteSi! how do you understand it so well!
ReplyDeletelovely!
ReplyDeletethey too have been in the moment...
ReplyDeleteThanks...
ReplyDeleteits so beautiful Jack ... how did you come up with this poem ... so deep.
ReplyDelete... there must be love underneath this one.
I will hear or read something and then I walk away.....then I come back.
ReplyDeleteI used to love writing and when I read something then I will just take my notepad and start writing from the soul...
Then after I will look at it again and then write it over and then I will post it.
yep. But one could only write something liked this one if there's love within the soul ... the heart speaks :)
ReplyDeleteOk....
ReplyDeleteThe Heart Speaks
The heart speaks within my soul
I am not sure where it goes
I fill my joy with those simple things
But my heart feels
The soul of my heart lays within the forrest
It's kind of deep within the woods
The echoes of what I feel
Are within my soul
The encounter, the ponders
Sometimes it does make me wonder
But I wandered within this trail before
So my hear speak within my soul
Expecations to be realized
I don't know as I can't begin to summarize
But the hear is one that does have it's own soul
A smile, a whisper that feel that makes one glow
Walking down the street
A look a smile enchanted me
And there within that moment my heart
Spoke within my soul
That would be the first draft...
oh love it Jack! Yeah the "Heart Speaks" here ...
ReplyDeletei am waiting for the second draft ... so beautiful ...
The heart speaks within my soul
ReplyDeleteI am not sure where it goes
I fill my joy with those simple things
But my heart feels
The soul of my heart lays within the forrest
It's kind of deep within the woods
The echoes of what I feel
Are within my soul
The encounter, the ponders
Sometimes it does make me wonder
But I wandered within this trail before
So my hear speak within my soul
Expecations to be realized
I don't know as I can't begin to summarize
*** I liked all but i particularly love this stanza's ... it speaks well of what's inside of the writer ... i do love it Jack. thanks
The Heart Speaks Within
ReplyDeleteThe heart speaks within my soul
Not sure where it goes
The fulfillment of the joy
Those simple things
My heart lies within the forest
Within the deepness of the woods
I utter my voice
To hear the echoes
The encounters coupled
With the ponders
Deep within the heart
Of this very soul
Passing by I see her eyes
That passing glance
Just for one moment
The exchange of the two hearts
Smiles cross and collide
All in one small moment
So much is realized
Just within that moment
Two eyes touched
Along with a smile
Within that moment
Everything seemed to stop
Perhaps two hearts
Both within a moment
For all I know
Is that my heart does
Speak from my soul
~Jgs~
Just write for you....
ReplyDeleteam speechless ... i don't know how would i say thanks Jack ...
ReplyDeleteNo perfecto est perfecto!
ReplyDeleteNo one is perfect! I do know, but you write well.
ReplyDeleteBoth are beautiful, Jack
ReplyDeleteThere are other night owls on tonight thanks I just did this fast as Maritess is
ReplyDeletetrying to get into writing..I look at here words from my last write and then
I found within it something.....
Writing is fun and is not something that one needs to be perfect.
Nor for others but you just flow with the thoughts one draft then into another.
Some are up late like me! :)
Goodnight Jack and bring with you my my hearts content as i thanks you from within my soul. Sweetdreams. God bless.
ReplyDelete.lovely ..and if "venus can dance with Mars" what is to stop us enjoying life on Earth!:)
ReplyDelete"Glance up
ReplyDeleteFor there is that view
The dancing of the stars
Look over there
As Venus dances with Mars"
This is exactly how I feel every time I look up at the night sky.
Beautiful poem, Jack. Thanks for sharing.
The stars in the night sky , shining bright and the beauty and wonder of it all does speak to the soul. Beautifully
ReplyDeleteLike the imagery of the celestial dance, moving.
ReplyDeleteThank you as really I just log off and come to some thoughts and then well you have done the same in earlier day! Oui :)
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